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[FAN FICTION] The Awesome Me - CHP 3 - Seduction @ 1:00 AM
Sunday, July 15, 2012


The Awesome Me - Chapter 3 - Seduction
Read Chapter 2 here 

What in the hell?
I opened my eyes, taking in all the blurry images. Where am I? I took a better look at the room I'm in. I am lying on bed, in a white room with drapes. Am I in the hospital? I tried to sit up, my head hurts.

"Are you alright?" I heard Kiseop's voice.
Turning towards the sound, I realized he had been sitting on a couch beside my bed.
I opened my mouth to speak, my throat feels dry.
"Drink some water" He said pouring me a cup of water.
"You've been unconscious for about 3 hours and class have ended. Kimberly is very worried about you but I sent her home."He explained double-checking the time with his watch.
Unconscious? 3 hours? That explains the weird symptoms I'm having.. But why am I here? The throbbing pain in my head wouldn't stop. It's so irritating.
"A guy named Eli accidentally threw the basketball at you that's why you're at the school's infirmary. " Kiseop continued, reading my confused expression. Oh, that explains it. Ohh... OH. Eli........ His name rang a bell in my head and a chill went up my spine.
"Are you ok? Can you speak?" He asked again, concerned.
"Yea, I'm alright, let's go." I pushed the covers away attempting to sit up. I lost my balance and almost fell backwards.
"Careful." Kiseop arms held me firmly around my waist.
"Thanks" I replied shyly. I am used to Kiseop's care since forever, but his gentle touch still moved my heart every single time. I felt my heart waver.

We had dinner at a nearby diner and he walked me home.
When we arrive under my block,
He released my hands and hugged me tight. "Good night." he breathed.
I hugged him back tightly, my hands moving up his back.
I can feel his heart beat like a humming bird flapping its wings.
His warm breath on my shoulders.
His temperature warming my body.
"Good night" I whispered into his ear.
He released me, and kissed me on my forehead. "See you tomorrow, my sweet angel".

Lying in bed, I couldn't sleep. Eli's face burned in my mind, etched in my heart.. Well, at least I know I can talk to him tomorrow.. Tomorrow will be a glorious day I assured myself. And fell asleep, drifting into Neverland.

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The first half of school went by in a breeze, introducing and re-introducing ourselves lesson after lesson. I can't wait for lunch where I will be meeting Kimchi in her classroom, 1-2.
When the lunch bell rang, I was the first one out the door. Reaching Kimchi's classroom quickly, I tidied my hair, and look at my reflection using the bulletin board outside. Perfect. I am perfect, as always.

"(yourname)" I'm here ! " Kimchi waved me over.
But before I walked over to her, I spotted a familiar face sitting up front.

Walking towards him,
I slowed my pace, and took a deep breath steadying myself.
What is wrong with this guy that can cause him to jumble up my plans? Leaving my thoughts scattered out in a complete mess?
"Hello." I lowered my gaze and looked into his eyes seductively. Many guys have fallen for this move, I love how guys get so flustered and stammer when I do this.
"Mworago?" He replied rudely , staring into my eyes, unwavering.
Slightly annoyed by his impolite tone, I conjure up a surprised face pretending his words have no effect on me.
"Me?" I cleared my throat uneasily. Why isn't it working on him??
"Don't you remember me?" I lowered my voice as thou I was talking about a secret love affair, and pulled up the corners of my mouth in a seductive grin.
The whole class is looking at us now.
"No." He said looking at me as if I've gone crazy trying to speak to him.
I wanted to pull at his hair and scream at his face.
How dare he treat me this way? Calming myself down, I flipped my hair.
"You are Eli Kim, right?" I asked cheerfully.
"Yes, and the answer is No." He said.
What is he talking about??
If my sex appeal isn't working on him, I'll go all innocent and girl-next-door. I thought to myself.
"Excuse Me?" I gave him my most innocent look.
"No, I will not date you." He replied giving an annoyed face as thou he is speaking to someone retarded.
"Uhm, I am not confessing my love to you" I said shyly, staring at the floor pretending to blush.
"If you're not, then stop wasting my time" he said, and before I could get another word across, he left the room.

He did NOT just left me stranding there alone with the whole class staring. Or did he?
I worked my anger away, and made a miserable face.
Hey, how are you? Are you alright? comforting words started shooting across the room.
"Oh, I just wanted to say that I was ok, and not badly injured even thou he threw a basketball at me, I thought he would be guilty." I said, faking tears.
I can be a nominated and might even get an award for my superb acting skills.

"There's nothing wrong with him, he have always been like that and with your pathetic looks, it's no wonder he didn't give a damn". A girl with jet black hair and bangs and a long straight hair all the way up to her ass said loudly.
I almost glared at her, but I held back intending to play the victim. It worked.
"Keep quiet Cheyenne, no one asked for your opinion." a guy retorted.
"Whatever" Cheyenne said and went out of class.
Hmmm, Cheyenne. What's her problem anyway? Maybe she confessed to Eli and got rejected, hence, the sour grape. I thought gleefully to myself.

After lunch, I went back to class, but Eli's humiliating actions still stung me.
You will fall, Eli Kim. I don't know how, I don't know when, but you will beg for me to be yours one day.

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Read Chapter 2 here 

Chapter 3 - Seduction has ended! How was your take on the first showdown between super cool Eli Kim, and yourself, the beauty queen of the school? I have been thinking and writing, writing and re-writing this scene over and over again. Something seems to be missing, the tension between them? Or did I make Eli out to be a complete asshole? Eli was structured to be a little cold towards woman, but I don't want him to come across as heartless, do hope I portray him just right. Also, do anticipate Chapter 4 - Rip it out.

DO TAKE NOTE* 
Will soon be giving the main character a name, as I will be writing from Kimberly's or Kimchi's point of view. To switch between 2 characters, I will switch thoughts like this
KIMBERLY 
----------------Here will be kimberly's (or your) thoughts.------------------------


MAIN CHARACTER
----------------Here will be your (and the name of "you") thoughts.------------------------

But to avoid confusion, I will usually choose a character, and write her thoughts for the whole chapter. Let me know here if you have a better and less confusing idea. Thank you! 


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